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Colin of God: An Angel's Love Story

Paul S. Mahajan

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“A spiritually driven but structurally flawed contemporary fable that explores divine intervention through the life of a miraculous foundling.”

The Colin of God: An Angel’s Love Story by Dr. Paul Mahajan, two celestial beings abandon an infant behind a Los Angeles dumpster to fulfill a mysterious divine plan. Discovered by a homeless woman, the child is named Ryan and eventually adopted by the devout Leigh family. As Ryan grows up alongside his close friends—Linda, Melissa, and Josh—it becomes clear he is no ordinary boy.

The narrative follows Ryan from adolescence to his career as a physician at St. Mary’s Hospital. Ryan instinctively taps into a mysterious spiritual energy, allowing him to perform supernatural feats, from warding off a wild bear in Yosemite to instantly curing ailing patients. As his abilities grow stronger, Ryan must navigate his earthly romance with Linda while confronting his divine origins.

The manuscript’s conceptual ambition is hindered by its execution. Mahajan’s prose is overly simplistic and relies heavily on exposition rather than engaging imagery. Dialogue frequently feels stilted, serving primarily to advance the plot rather than grounding the cast in realism. Pacing is highly erratic; the narrative leaps through decades of Ryan’s life with jarring speed, transitioning abruptly from childhood to adulthood without allowing pivotal moments to breathe.

Consequently, the characters remain flat, one-dimensional archetypes. Ryan is portrayed as flawlessly serene, devoid of the internal conflict necessary to make his human experience compelling. His friends function mostly as awestruck witnesses to his miracles. While the premise of an angel navigating modern life offers charm, the story leans heavily on established genre tropes and didactic spiritual messaging. The lack of meaningful tension severely undercuts the narrative’s emotional resonance.

An earnest but clumsily executed spiritual novella that will appeal mostly to readers seeking straightforward, faith-based allegories.

From the Reader’s Desk

The text constructs a fascinating ontological premise: a celestial being navigating the mundane realities of human adolescence and adulthood. While the character of Ryan serves effectively as a vessel for thematic explorations of divine destiny and earthly sacrifice, his trajectory from a miraculous foundling to a benevolent physician often lacks the psychological friction necessary for deep character development. Nevertheless, the narrative’s exploration of faith—particularly the juxtaposition of Ryan’s otherworldly abilities, like pacifying a wild bear or walking through hospital walls, against the grounding presence of his human companions like Linda and Josh—offers a compelling, albeit structurally simple, meditation on the intersection of the sacred and the profane. The story challenges the reader to consider the heavy burden of harboring a divine purpose within a fragile, human framework.

— Dr. Elias Thorne

This narrative dares to ask what happens when the divine is literally dropped into the modern world, bypassing traditional genre boundaries to craft a contemporary fable. By charting the life of an abandoned angelic infant who grows into a miraculous healer, the book initiates essential conversations about destiny versus free will. The protagonist’s climactic realization aboard a commercial airliner pushes the boundaries of conventional Christian fiction, forcing readers to grapple with the absolute sacrifice required by higher callings. It is a decisive, thought-provoking addition to the subgenre of spiritual allegory, anchoring its massive celestial stakes in the everyday setting of a bustling Los Angeles hospital.

— Margaret Sterling

Get ready for a wild ride that mixes medical drama with straight-up celestial intervention! The story kicks off with a literal angel baby dumped behind a trash can and rockets through his life as he casually phases through hospital storage rooms and stares down raging bears in Yosemite. It’s a bit wacky at times, but Ryan’s journey from a glowing prodigy to an ER doctor zapping away headaches is undeniably fun. Balancing high-stakes spiritual destiny with everyday romance, this punchy narrative manages to deliver genuine insight into faith without ever tapping the brakes.

— Julian Cross

Okay, so talk about shaking things up! I just finished this book about a literal angel named Ryan who gets adopted and grows up to be this insanely gorgeous, miracle-working doctor. It feels totally surreal to read, like you’re just having some juicy chats with your besties, and suddenly the main character is out here curing patients with a touch and glowing in the middle of a hospital hallway. The romance with his childhood friend Linda gets all up in your feelings, especially when he has to figure out how to balance his cute earthly life with his massive divine mission. Trust me, the whole setup is a total trip.

— Chloe Jenkins

Boom! What did I just read?! One minute we are camping in Yosemite and the next, Ryan is commanding a wild bear to go away with just his voice! This book totally messes with your head in the best way possible. Is he a man? Is he an angel? The way it pokes at the big ideas of God’s plan versus just wanting to be normal and marry the girl you love is so intense! When the insane, fiery climax hits at 30,000 feet on an airplane?! Mind blown! I was literally screaming at the pages!

— Samira Rossi

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Bob Miles and his wife Janet reside in Southeast Pennsylvania.They are the parents of two Chinese-American children. Bob has worked as a professional guitarist and is the creator/host of Miles of Music (formerly, World of Guitar) television series. Miles of Music has aired on television for close to 25 years and in many markets including Nashville, Tennessee and Los Angeles, California. Bob has been honored twice by the New York Coalition for Healthy School Food and Once by The Pearl S. Buck Foundation. Bob also holds two Grammy certificates.

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